Again with oddly specific to the situation dreams, although Since it's Kari, and she's prone to being possessed by the Spirit of the Digital World due to her status as the Child of Light, I thought it worked. Yes, that chimey music stuff is the Spirit of the Digital World. *shrugs* I know it didn't have a voice, but I'm dealing with words here, and a floating pile of glitter might look cool, but describing it.... eh. so yeah, it became music-y stuff. I liked writing Kari in this. She's such a sweetheart. She knows exactly wants going to happen, poor duck, and everything is against her. Ken, her friend's loyalty, the universe, me... but it had to be done. I was also fond of bringing back " Mimi's Army" which really saved everyone's butts in the last few episodes of the first season and never really comes up again. Agumon got a line! I am so terrible at remembering the digimon, so I was proud that I remembered he's have been there. not that he'd be much good in a fight, but hey. Here, Davis goes OOC. and by that, I mean he shows some smarts. Davis, upon re-watching season two, seems dumber than I remembered. But oh well. We'll say " character development!" and that he reverts back to normal because of trama. Or maybe a blow to the head. Moving on. The conversations were weird to write. I don't do well with conversations, because when I write, I get deep in character, and switching POVs so fast is HARD. anyway. Ken was colder than I'd have liked, because I do love the guy, but that's life.
That Trust Password thing has always fascinated me. I like using them in my stories, but of course, the DD probably wouldn't think of it, which is odd since there are shapeshifters running about. so I had fun with that. The question took me ages to think up, but I did find one that worked. This ending was the last of the not so Really Terrible Cliffhangers- yet at least three reviews pointed out the evil cliffie. It Amused me greatly.
Chapter Eleven: Light's Ransom.
Dear heaven, I loved writing this chapter, which says a lot of things about me, none of them good. I'm evil, Evil, Evil. And I regret nothing. This was mostly written quite late on a Thursday night, something I never do- but in this case I was leaving friday morning and had no computer access all weekend. and I wanted to torment people. So up it went. T.K's plan went into motion, and went well, something that tends not to happen in any kid's shows. Of course, he was a bit of an idiot for not having brought any kind of tool, but then, he was only 11, and it was more of a desperate Hope than a plan. T.K's good at Desperate Hopes. They usually work better for him than this one. Some adorable Takari fluff- I don't really care about pairings, but there are four exceptions to my rule- Castle and Beckett in Castle, Ash and Misty in Pokemon, Katara and Aang in Avatar, and T.K and Kari. And that last one I've held onto since I was nine years old. So yeah, had to do that, I just had to. Anyway, Chekov's Magic Digimon Feather shows up, and things are looking pretty good. the audience lets out a sigh of relief.
And then it all goes South. Davis get's to be flipping AWESOME, something I never in a million years thought I'd write. The cavalry comes, yay, epic battle that's not so epic due to the depressing lack of epic battle music from either Lord of the rings or Narnia.
And then I pulled what was The single worst, in my mind, of ANY of my cliffhangers EVER.
I'll do a post on cliffhangers next.
I warned people about me killing characters. I have an attack, Kari in pain, blackout.
Whatever possessed me? Oh yeah. I'm evil. also, the Core, Which is the next chapter, which I will talk about AFTER the Cliffhanger stuff.
see you soon.
~HNA
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